Edward Dean's Blog – November 2009 Archive (6)

War and Peace part 2... the real deal challange.

I really only need six WORDS for ths challenge!


Sun

Pond

Ducks

Hunter

Silent

Night!

Added by Edward Dean on November 29, 2009 at 9:00pm — 3 Comments

Infidelity is a Vauge Preception.

Searching for a voice of welcome as her key slipped the door open, none came.



She entered the bedroom, only to find her husband and the badly peroxided blonde hussy from down the street in HER bed as she stumbled through the shock, searching for words that would resonate her disgust.



An open mouth and wide tear stained eyes were all she could muster through her petrified body as it stood in the doorway quaking.



Her adrenaline laced mind was filled with flashes… Continue

Added by Edward Dean on November 19, 2009 at 7:39pm — 4 Comments

Writers Block

If I hear the words 'writers block' one more time, I'm going to scream, "open your fucking veins and bleed because isn't that what every good, great writer did before us?"



Was Poe his own 'Ulalume', or Hemingway his own 'Old man and the Sea", Shakespeare in 'Hamlet and Macbeth ' bleeding with their own self doubts by slitting their wrists?



You chose to write so bleed your own private passion and know their is no story without the pain of you.



If you want to be a… Continue

Added by Edward Dean on November 17, 2009 at 6:00pm — 7 Comments

A Gates and Orwell view of 2004

The big city broods through arteries of undeground hollowed and hallowed tubular viens of connection as they make their way through the putrid flesh of the uncontrolled beast.



Little globules of humanity blink at the surface sunshine as they pop up to the skin of the city's surface desperately running to occupy the little cubicle cells of their paycheck.



An unwitting eye of the computer screen intimidates their minds with a voraicious need to consume the give and take of… Continue

Added by Edward Dean on November 16, 2009 at 1:00am — 1 Comment

A Woman

Our media mandates the question of who this quintesential creature is with all its posters of angular anorexic models that feed a famine of dreams to unsuspecting children that have no idea what a woman is or should be but allow me explain what a woman truly is.



A woman is a warm soft flowing curve that is comfortable in a dressing gown or a ball gown.



A woman is a pink round face of wonder that easily exudes a smile of things to come.



A woman is a supermarket… Continue

Added by Edward Dean on November 12, 2009 at 11:30pm — 5 Comments

And the winner is??????? Bob Clay!

Read Paul Phillips forum post for the winners of the Kalitz challenge.
Sometimes critique is just as important as writing.
Thanks to all for participating. It was a fun and 'off the wall' adventure!

Added by Edward Dean on November 11, 2009 at 8:37pm — 3 Comments

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