What can YOU say in six sentences?
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A fabulous way of making love less soppy than usual> i really love your style...
oh my, I like this a lot. Very powerful; yet soft and heartbreaking as well. The imagery is fabulous! A start to finish winner.
I like this alot. great six!
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- Relationship Status:
- In a Relationship
- About Me:
- I'm a technical writer. I write and code help documentation and user interface. (It's one way you can use a BA in Creative Writing & Literature).
I hope to publish memoirs & novels (someday). I have been published in Six Sentences and Swink Magazine. I am a hopeful romantic, and I love pouring all of those hopes into prose... which is how I fell in love with Six Sentences.
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Exhibit A
We can't erase the old tapes, but we can always make new ones. Every moment of your life is in there and when I look you hard in the eyes I see them all. Those moments filed away in manila and cardboard, every
kiss and every lie crushed in bubble wrap; sealed air-tight. Every dream you only started and every promise you made are raw and indexed carefully in an office with a window. You will always keep a copy of the happiest moments I have. I'll always have proof that you love me.
kiss and every lie crushed in bubble wrap; sealed air-tight. Every dream you only started and every promise you made are raw and indexed carefully in an office with a window. You will always keep a copy of the happiest moments I have. I'll always have proof that you love me.
Posted on March 28, 2009 at 3:51pm — 8 Comments
Seven
My dream has a name, and a mind, and a heart all its own. No matter how distant it seems, I feel it in my deepest corners; peeling back the edges of my heart and making them flutter. A shadow aches over every moment that comes and goes with my dream (still a dream). Somewhere in between the comings and goings, sometimes, I get a little taste. It goes down rough and sweet like a wine that's aged too long. I've waited, long and patient, to be realized by a dream.
Posted on March 23, 2009 at 6:30pm — 7 Comments
Comment Wall (12 comments)
- At 5:26pm on August 3, 2009,
Dude A Bydes said…
- Naomi- Thanks for your comment and thanks for your "pouring out." Don't rush that anticipation thing; someday you'll realize it is the best part of romance and of writing. Abide.-Dude
- At 10:09pm on July 29, 2009,
Nurry said…
- thank you for your kindness....It means a lot to me that you took the time to send me condolences. Bless You.
- At 10:11am on June 5, 2009,
Dude A Bydes said…
- Naomi: I am drawn to your writing as I am drawn to the ghosts of my own past relationships. Once upon a time, I too had these feelings and expectations. You captured a moment from your present and from my past with Exhibit A. Nicely done. I'm dedicating my next sixer to these "filed away" moments we "share." -Dude
- At 2:46am on April 4, 2009,
ronnie whitehill said…
- thanks for the friendship....cheers
- At 8:15pm on March 31, 2009,
Nicole Andrea Aube said…
- Your words romance the reader.
I like how your page looks, Naomi!
- At 12:15pm on March 30, 2009,
The Beauty Queen From Mars said…
- thanks for the friend request. Welcome to 6S!
- At 1:18pm on March 29, 2009,
Ken Wohlrob said…
- Hello Naomi. Thanks so much for reaching out.
- At 10:59pm on March 28, 2009,
Daniel said… - Welcome friend!
- At 8:15pm on March 28, 2009,
Don P said… - Welcome to 6S. Thanks for the add!
- At 4:33pm on March 25, 2009,
Michael Solender said… - welcome to the 6 naomi
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