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Andrea DeAngelis
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love the last line
and this is a hypothetical comment
"It was like droning pain and monotonous sadness", it's weird how someone's music is noise to others, but this really sums up that experience, inexplicable and unavoidable
i'm scared of hookers. off topic but relevant ok.
Rather dark story. Full bodied like a Merlot that lingers. I liked the melon lipstick. You did this well.
This is a very cool character you have created here....would be interested to see what other strings she has in her bow!!
love this line
"They can’t, with innocence like a broken mirror; their spirits are forever flawed by the jagged splinters of sinful acts from hedonistic pursuits."
Reminds me of the film Shallow Grave actually, that unearthed freaky feeling
thanks guys, I'm overwhelmed by this site at the moment. I'll take a look at your pieces soon!
I liked that line too - and "a calm kind of mad". Very well written!
“Your children are beautiful,” she said, handing back his wallet after removing several bills. Her mouth was fringed by bitten-off melon lipstick, a calm kind of mad. She told him to call her Sally, “like the song McCartney rips his lungs on.” She...
Comment Wall (3 comments)
- At 7:23am on April 18, 2009,
Olive Rosehips said…
- Welcome to 6S Andrea.
- At 8:42am on April 17, 2009,
Michael Solender said…
- welcome to the 6 andrea!
- At 7:56am on April 17, 2009,
Robert McEvily said… - Hi Andrea - welcome!
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- About Me:
- Andrea DeAngelis’ writing has appeared in Salome Magazine, Flutter Poetry Journal, Mad Swirl and Gloom Cupboard and is forthcoming in Word Riot, Terracotta Typewriter, Clockwise Cat Mud Luscious and Dogmatika. Andrea also sings and plays guitar in an indie rock band called MAKAR (www.makarmusic.com). MAKAR is currently recording their second album, Funeral Genius.
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- http://www.makarmusic.com
Andrea DeAngelis's Blog
Children are always beautiful
“Your children are beautiful,” she said, handing back his wallet after removing several bills. Her mouth was fringed by bitten-off melon lipstick, a calm kind of mad. She told him to call her Sally, “like the song McCartney rips his lungs on.” She was a different kind of whore but this hotel room was the same as the ones before, empty and strained, the smut of a stain on the white coffee cup never rubbed away. “Of course, children are always beautiful,” she concluded, “it’s adults who go ugly.”… Continue
Posted on April 17, 2009 at 10:21am — 5 Comments
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